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Hello mo chairde, we are here at last the final journal entry for our class. Although I quite being against the grain when ever I write about things, I am going to write about the Act Out fair. I feel that for same much work and great pay off it is worth giving a little thought. It was a great day it was bitter sweet. Sweet in the sense that the school yeah is nearly over and work is complete, and bitter in the sense that I will be leaving many cherished classmates. I really enjoyed looking at everyones final project everyone put forth their best efforts. I must say that I too enjoyed the Share your Soles video. Mona Purdy indeed has put a lot of time and effort. Even looking back on this project, there were so many upsets. So much disappointment. We were so stressed out trying to find something to do. Though even though we started with the intention of doing volunteer work for underage drinking, I am happier that we chose Working Bikes. I feel that by working there, our work actually mattered. Not to mention it was fun doing so as well. As many of you all know my volunteer work is for the Irish Republican Movement. I’m always helping out my boys back home. I though that no matter what service we picked I would not enjoy it nearly as much as the work I do for the liberation struggle. Though I must say I enjoyed so much that I really am thinking of volunteering again. I hope others not just me follow up the service they enjoyed and keep at it. Professor McGuire has done a good thing here, by getting the youth of today involved in the community and shaping it for the better. This quote next quote I have used before in my papers. It is by Irish Republican Bobby Sands who died on hungerstrike in 1981. His 31st anniversary of his death is actually approaching this 5th of May so in two days. Even though his quote is in reference to the Irish peoples fight for freedom, I think it can be related to any activ service or volunteer work.”Everyone, Republican or otherwise, has their own particular part to play. No part is too great or too small; no one is too old or too young to do something.”That mo chairde is where I leave you. I wish everyone best of luck in the future in whatever career they do. Do what you love and you’ll never work a day in your life. Slán go fóill mo chairde. Tiocfaidh ár lá Cillian O’Nuainn (Killian Noonan)
Act Out Fair. COM102. May 1st. 2012.
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What I wanted to do for my journal was the phrase we heard in class. The one referring to the right word is like lightening and the almost right word is like a lightening bug. What that means is, the right word is like lightening, its electric and profound. Much like the right word in your paper. Whereas the almost right word is a lightening bug. It is not as electric or profound. There is not as much conviction between lightening and a lightening bug. Very similar to the amount of conviction in a right word and almost right word. Lightening makes people stop and look in awe. Lightening bugs make people shoot quick glances. Much is true for the right word, people will stop and listen. he almost right word, your audience won’t be as big and they will not pick up what you are putting down.
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Killian Noonan
Memoirs of a Volunteer
There are many issues in the world and they need to be highlighted to others. I had been so used to doing my own type of active service. I had never actually done work with another organization. For once my efforts were being put towards something other than the Irish Republican struggle. It started by getting into teams followed by choosing an organization, which deals with a cause we are all interested and concerned about. My team and I chose alcoholism but narrowed it down to underage drinking. Since we are all young, we can relate to the subject and issue. The reason we chose this topic is because my team and I can relate to the issue. Myself and two other teammates are all under twenty-one. Whereas the fourth member of our group is twenty-six and well over the legal age to drink. For three younger colleagues and myself it had more of a personal feel. As the issue seems more close to home and something we all have experienced. I think it is an excellent opportunity for my fellow classmates. To spread the word on underage drinking, educate youth, and prevent alcohol abuse in minors.
What is unique about this project for me, is that I myself am guilty of underage drinking. Growing up in an Irish family, drinking was not a big deal and was not as serious as in some of my friend’s house. However, I think we can accomplish a lot and get our message out there. I think we will great a great response from our peers. For one we are not an authority figure trying to tell them what to do. We are students like them, who have all been there and done that. I also think it is less stressful to express and share stories with other youths because they understand one another. Our goal is to make sure we get the word out to educate the youth on the dangers of consuming alcohol. The effects it has on the youthful body and mind. The dangers of drinking and driving, and the long-term life consequences it may bare.
As a team we immediately arranged our first meeting to cover the basic information for the project. Each teammate was to find organizations dealing with alcohol abuse and underage drinking. A few very informative websites we found were the DARE.com, NIAA.NIH.gov, Stopalcoholabuse.gov, MADD.com and Drawtheline.com. These were all very informative websites, but we ran into a major problem. As we searched the websites for volunteer opportunities with them we came to a stand still. Unfortunately, we were unable to help service these organizations. We either we had to be certified in a specific field to have hands on experiences, take a TB and drug test, which would have taken at least a couple to a few weeks for the results. Or simply we did not receive a response after many phone calls with them.
One of our teammates began to think smaller. So she contacted a couple local police officers and a high school teacher. She asked them if the city had any organizations dealing directly with underage drinking and alcohol abuse. We received a print out of several pages with all sorts of different organizations from the YMCA to family help lines. Yet out of all those organizations, we are not able to volunteer at any place. We did not realize this would be such a challenge. I honestly thought that the amount of organizations would be limitless. However, we came to a real challenge getting involved in an organization.
Now as our time is coming to an end I am beginning to stress out and panic because we have yet to volunteer and collect all the necessary information we need for the fair. The fairs are quickly approaching which are on April 30th, 2012 or May 1st, 2012. My group and I all want to be prepared and have as much information as possible. Even to give my own personal thoughts ad reflections. What my experience was volunteering for this organization. I want people to be interested, and well educated, and how they can help this epidemic of underage drinking.To keep things moving we decided as a team to come up with at least two other organizations besides drinking underage. If all else fails with the first project we have back up plans. The team and I spoke with the Professor after class because we were in desperate need of help. How can we move forward? Is there something we did wrong? Are there any new ideas we have not came up with? Is there a different option to volunteering with an organization? Or should we move forward with something new? Well the team and I decided it would be smart to move on to one of the other organizations. For our second choice we really liked the idea of helping the United States Veterans. We got a hold of the VA Hospital in Hines, Illinois. Justyna called the organization and spoke with a woman named Kim. Justyna said was very pleasant over the phone and gave her high hopes of being able to work with them. When she received her call back from Kim she explained to Justyna she was very excited and appreciative that we were interested and wanting to volunteer. However, she had bad news for us. In order for us to volunteer at the VA we would have to take a TB test and have a background check done on each of the team members. This was not the issue however. My tam and I are willing to go to any lengths to get something going but time is fast approaching. If we were to take these tests, we were told the results would not be in for at least a couple months.
Our team has been working hard to find a good organization we can work with. However, the challenges we have faced have leaded us back to the beginning. Now we are to the point of trying to find more organizations that are easier to work with and can fit us as soon as possible. We so far have a couple new organizations that we can work with. They are Feed My Starving Children (FMSC) and Share Your Souls. Professor McGuire found these two places in the fist semester. One of my teammates has been to Share Your Soles, and another to FMSC. I however, have not been to either. Though I do not have any quarrels at this point in our project. I just would like to work with an organization and get this completed. I think this is a great move on our part. It gives us an advantage this time because we have a knowledge and experience with these organizations. Not to mention from what I have heard, they are flexible with their time and most importantly do a great deal of work to those in need. We plan on having a date set with either of these organizations by Tuesday morning and be ready to volunteer and interview the place so we can get moving. Volunteering at a different organization is all new and exiting to me. Like I said my interests and skills were put towards the Irish republican struggle. Maybe, I can take something out of my experiences here and learn something so that these challenges do not happen again. -
Killian Noonan
In class the last couple of weeks, I have seen a theme here. Not just the theme of service, but a theme of analyzing pictures and interpreting them. We did one such picture in class, of a man named Bob, who had all sorts of tattoos on his body and face. Now as someone who has a tattoo, I nearly feel a sort of connection to others with tattoos. Before if I saw a tattoo that looked ridiculous, I would really think little of the person. Though now I look at people after I got my tattoo and it intrigues me. I wonder what does that tattoo stand for or represent, or what was going through their mind when they got it. There was mixed feelings in the class rooms, however, I feel that more people were able to identify the mans free spirit and independence. Unfortunately, we are a society that judges on appearance. So I can imagine the hardships the man with tattoos goes through to get a job with tattoos on his face. However, if anyone has a tattoo and has a unique story behind it, they definitely have my respect. It is almost a solidarity that fellow tattoo bearers have.
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Killian Noonan
Our Com102 class went to the theater on Tuesday to watch a presentation at Moraine by Invisible Children, the one responsible for this Kony 2012 thing going around. Now when the video first came out I watched it. However, I didn’t share it or I did not post the video or post “Kony 2012″ on any social media. I did my research, Invisible Children, is not a non profit organization, it is a business. The actual money they raise, only 32% goes to the cause in Uganda. Now do not get me wrong, what Kony did was terrible. However, I do not trust this “organization.” Not to mention the maker of the video had a nervous break down. He was caught naked in public, and also masturbating. That right there sends red flags up about the calibre of this organization. What also makes me nervous how Invisible Children and all who collaborate in it, call for military aid in Uganda. Which I find more to be than just coincidental, seeing as it was recently discovered there is oil in Uganda. All in all I will not sell into this groups lies. It really aggravated me of the ignorance of our students here at Moraine. Instead of calling up your local congressman to support this “movement” against Kony like the video “Kony 2012″ asked for, call up your local congress man to see if you will have a job after college. The youth of America today is unfortunately easily swayed by liberal hippie propaganda. In the 60s and 70s, young people like us took to the streets about issues that mattered to us. Now this day and age we are trying to save the world by posting videos. It’s time to get real people. Walk the walk, don’t just talk the talk. That is all I have to say about Invisible Children Inc. I was also quite upset that after the video being out so long, that everyone would have been more educated and not fallen for this rubbish. However, sadly I saw many of the Moraine Valley community college be swayed.
Invisible Children. 2012, April 2012. KONY 2012.-
Prof McGuire
Killian, thanks for your honest thoughts on Invisible Children. I do, however, think your comments do not do the issue full justice and do not fairly characterize the organization or the issue.
You mention that you did your research, but you don’t cite any sources, so how can your reader here look into those sources, as well, to see if they are credible, well vetted, and worth basing judgment upon? If you are going to cite “research,” you need to name it and document it, otherwise it means nothing.
Your repeating of the criticism of the 32% funding to “the cause,” has been bandied about on the internet and in the media, but it does not tell the whole story. That figure only accounts for direct aid efforts on the ground and does not take into account the vast awareness or advocacy efforts central to organization’s mission (such as the films). Citing this figure they way you do suggests something unsavory about where the rest of the money is going. I don’t believe this is the case based on the financial breakdown published by the organization itself and analyzed by Charity Navigator. Take a closer, more critical look at the numbers.
Jason Russel does seem to have had a nervous breakdown of sorts–presumably buckling under intense pressures and criticism and the spotlight that has been placed on him and his family. This, however, does not negate the Invisible Children’s mission, the work they are doing, or the work that Jason Russel himself has done. He’s a person, who is currently dealing with physical and emotional issues. None of us are above such things.
You say that Invisible Children is not a not-for-profit organization. This is not true. It is a legal not-for-profit organization. Do you have information to the contrary?
Anyway, one source that is credible and worth looking at is Charity Navigator. They have weighed in on the current controversy: http://www.charitynavigator.org/index.cfm?bay=content.view&cpid=1359
Also, take a close look at the audited financial statements available on the Invisible Children web site.
Thanks again, Killian, for pushing this conversation forward. I appreciate it.
Best,
Prof McGuire
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Killian Noonan
For journal entry 9 I wanted to tie in the overall theme and meaning of this COM102 class. It is clear that it makes a statement, of gong out into the world and serving others. Even though I already did this, it was nice to go into a class tat thought so highly of service. Although it will be kind if hard to cite this, I’ll do the best I can. Group members and myself have been discussing our thoughts and feelings on the class. I hope others continue to serve way after this class is over. It was good ho many were exposed to problems in the world they even knew about. Its one thing to know a problem, but it is even better to know how you can help solve it. Many people do not understand the the importance of service. That sometimes they need to looks beyond themselves, and their own needs. They need to pull together and act for the greater good. If I could give anyone great advice out of anything of mine they have read it wold be this. Volunteering and service, is a lot of hard work. When you think it is over, it’s not. There is always something else to do, and if you feel so passionately about a cause you will proceed till it gets done.
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Killian Noonan
I read Bobby Harro’s, “Cycle of Socialization,” and thought about it for a while. In a perfect world, equality and peace would be a truly beautiful thing. Any amount of conflict can make everyone a different individual. One thing I do not agree with is that we are prescribed into our own socialization groups. Individuals can choose to act and live a certain way on their own. However, just because we are exposed to one way of living within society, doesn’t mean it labels us for who we are and what path we go down. It really struck a cord with me, because it is the total opposite way I think. As an individual. I have a group of friends, however that does not mean whatever they do I too follow by example. I am an independent. I like to think in many cases I am a dissident going against the status quo. I often am interested in many perspectives to get a idea of how some people live by a life philosophy. People such as Harro are all part of the benefit of college learning experience.I believe its up to the individual after coming out of childhood and growing up, how they chose to live. Although we may have been raised and taught right, but what is saying that was the correct or incorrect way.
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Killian Noonan
Active Service
I find it quite extraordinary, that being here in America I can find a way to help the cause over in Ireland. Many people would like at the far distance alone and be discouraged to do something. However, for me I know my contribution helps the Republican Struggle. It indeed raises my spirit when I hear how my efforts mattered in a big way. This past Christmas I sent in a parcel of books to Republican POWs in Maghaberry prison. When I heard off my one friend who is held within Maghaberrys walls, he proudly told me that he and all the lads are enjoying the books, and they were over the moon to receive them. It was Christmas Eve when I received the phone call from Gerard telling me, and he and all the POWs inside passed on their warmest of Christmas greetings and thanks. I think this was m favorite Christmas yet.
People asked me, many of who were my friends why I did it. What difference did it make? My retort was, right not at this time in the Republican struggle, morale is crucial. Giving support to POWs at this time during their dirty protest is always needed. Not to mention, this is something I would hope a young Republican like myself to do if I was imprisoned within Maghaberry. Not to mention, in this struggle there are many parts to play. I believe in my past papers I quote a saying from the late Bobby Sands, which said. “Everyone, Republican or otherwise, has their own particular part to play. No part is too great or too small; no one is too old or too young to do something.” I feel that while I’m here in America my part to play is in support for the Irish Republican POWs.
Besides keeping the morale of the POWs high at this crucial phase in the ongoing prison struggle, highlighting and bringing awareness is crucial as well. Why in fact just recently on this past St. Patrick’s Day, my Irish Freedom Committee comrades and I marched in the parade. We highlighted the ongoing plight of injustice for Marian Price, who has been held in solitary confinement for over a year with no charge. IFC and I also raised awareness Of the degrading forced strip searches POWs have to go through, which is a total abuse of their human rights. The day was very good and we got a lot of positive feed back from the public as we marched. Numerous people came up to me asking questions and it mad me proud to tell them the situation and to raise awareness of the ongoing struggle in the Republican Movement.
This is my service that I take great pride in. It may be controversial, and it even might have you put on surveillance. All that does not matter to me anyway. I am an Irish Republican activist; the fear of imperialistic surveillance, or harassment from anti- Republican forces does not coerce me. I know I have back up from wider Irish Republican community. Not to mention to extra drive I have that two good friends who in fact seem like brothers are there for me and I for them. As a young Irish republican I’m always asked why do I believe in such an outdated ideology. My retort is: All throughout Irish history young people have shown the way. Whether it is Kevin Barry, Tom Williams, or Seamus McElwaine. These youthful men all took up the cause for freedom and paid the ultimate sacrifice. Freedom is all but an outdated ideology, and this generation, along with future ones will show it is not either.-
Kevin Flores
This was a really cool paper I enjoyed reading it, it was interesting. I like how you brought up that on St. Patrick’s Day you marched in the parade with other people who support your cause. Because a lot of people really think about St. Patrick’s Day as a day to just drink and get drunk and really don’t know the true purpose and meaning of that day. I think its great that you used that opportunity to do something positive and bring awareness to an issue that is obviously something that we need to change. I also like how you wrote how this personally affects you. I found it very interesting when you wrote about your friends who are locked up in the jail in Ireland and how you sent them books to read.
I also think it is very good that here in America we can find ways to help out people over seas because we are a country that is very well of and quite frankly there are a lot of wealthy people that have a lot of money and should at least give some of it to charity to help out people over seas that are less fortunate and do not have the kind of resources that we have or like in Irelands case are facing oppression.
There was some stuff that I think would have helped your paper out one is you could have explained the people at the end of your paper who you mentioned helped take stands for the Irish people and gave their lives for it. If you were to explain I guess you can say the scenarios that they were in or more about what they meant for the movement it would definitely clear up any questions that the reader might have about this. Another thing you might want to add is how someone can get involved in this issue and contribute to helping the people in Ireland. This is a problem that I think would attract a lot of attention and would get more people involved if they were to know more about it, because this is an issue that I honestly don’t think a lot of people know about or realize that these kind of bad things are still going on. If you were to change these two things in your paper I feel that it would help make your paper better and help spread your message to more people and get more supporters and educate people about this issue.
Like I said before this was a good paper it is very interesting and it shows the reader that you care about this topic and are obviously willing to get involved and help try to fix this issue. You also tell the reader how not only are you interested in it but it affects you and you have a personal problem with it which just gives you more motivation to get rid of this problem. One more thing I was wondering what does mo chara mean?-
Killian Noonan
I’ll take not on the further elaboration Kevin. “Mo chara” means “my friend” in Irish. I say other bits a pieces of Irish in my papers so if you have any other questions feel free to ask. I am just a big advocate of the revival of the Irish language hence why I try to use it everyday!
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Nick Kleopa
Killian, I thought this paper was much more interesting. I am more than confident that you spent more time with this paper than your last. This paper seemed like you definitely took your time. One thing that did catch my eye which I thought would have been a good idea to post is what a POW is, as most in our class probably don’t know what it means. Prisoner of war is not really that common of a term used. As far as Kevin’s response to your paper, I think you both or completely %100 rite on target with saying that most people who celebrate St Patrick day just think its just another day to go out and get messed up. I think people make that day just another special day to be drunk and act stupid. One thing that bothers me is that In my opinion it makes the Irish holiday look bad. This past St. Patricks day we had I believe 5+ alcohol related deaths. Just goes to show you how people spend their st. Patricks day. Any way, back to your paper, as usual you didn’t disappoint me with your words. The way you told the whole thing, it painted a nice picture in my mind of what happened, what you were feeling and how your pow buddies were feeling after you sent them those books. I think I was wondering before what was the deal about your friends that were imprisoned, I’m pretty sure you mentioned it in one of your other papers. As much as I’d like to know what happened, I respect you and know that you need not post anything incriminating of your friends situations. I think you posted something like they were standing up for something that they believed in and when asked to step down, they didn’t and held their grounds. Something along those lines. Anyways, I think it was really thoughtful to send them books to read and it may not sound like all that. I bet it was one of the greatest presents they received. A book can go a long ways when you in solitary confinement. It was also nice of them to send you thanks for the books that they received. I liked how you posted how their letter back made you feel and how that Christmas was one of the best ones you had. Once again in this paper as well as several others of your papers, I liked how you use little Irish words and or phrases. I read you comment on Kevin’s post and thought it was nice that you incorporate a few words from your background into the papers that you post. I also like the topic once again, I admire your beleives and your position on the history and future of the Irish. It is nice to see someone take so much pride in their history. All in all, nice paper, looks as if you took your time with this one. Keep up the good writing and I hope to learn more about the Irish in your next papers to come.
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Killian Noonan
Thanks for the input mo chara. Indeed like Kevin stated earlier, what many think St. Patricks Day is about is sad. Unfortunately, more of that negative thought comes within the Irish American community. I’m afraid a vast majority of the Irish-American community really in America knows very little of their roots. The sad and unfortunate truth. I did put more thought into this paper, your reading has not deceived you. I appreciate you understanding my position with not disclosing my friends details of their incarceration. The important matter is they are Irish Republicans. Besides that though, they are ordinary people like you and me, whom you might meet on campus at Moraine. Or moderately enjoying a few drinks in a pub on St. Patricks Day. Anyway I appreciate the feedback, mo chara.
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Klem Bachleda
Ha! Touchee! I’m very excited to see somebody that has emotional ties to a problem they are trying to resolve and help out with. It’s not very often you find somebody that puts heart into a service as a volunteer. It’s very rare to hear of somebody actually putting money into volunteering (like paying for postage to Ireland. I respect your views and actions that you you take concerning a metter of great interest and concern to you. I also like the fact that you are knowledgable of the matter and it shows you were involved/concerned with the issue of Rupublicans action/activists in Ireland before this class was started.
The fact that you belong to the Irish Freedom Committee shows your involvment in this situation. I too, belong to a number of organization that involve Poland’s Politics, culture and involvement in the world’s issues. I too have emotional ties to these issues that driectly involve the country I am from.
I’m glad to see that even if people come here to the U.S., they don’t forget about problems back at home and try to help with different situations even if there thousands of miles away.
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Killian Noonan
Really appreciate the feedback Klem. It brings me great joy to know other people are involved in the politics of their native land. We are a rare breed Klem. The farther I am from Ireland, the more Irish I am. Likewise I wold expect with you and Poland. Until we chat again, slan go foill mo chara.
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Killian Noonan
My journal entry this week is going to be about the film we watched in class on Tuesday. The film was called “The Examined Life,” by Pete Singer. There was a lot of interesting and compelling statements within the clip we watched. He talked about the ethics of consumerism and how we as a society buy alot. In the film he gave a scenario that of you happened to come across. A child drowning and you were wearing expensive shoes, what would you do. Of course me and my group said we would save the child and the matter of the shoes is unimportant. However, he points out that a majority of people would think of the shoes first. Now Singer also mentioned how the amount of miney we spend in unnecessary things, that money can go to a foundation for good like UNICEF etc. Singer said something in the film that really stuck with me. What it basically was, is that although our consuming of products is not harming anyone it is not helping anyone either. That really is where he hit the ethics of spending money and consuming.
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Killian Noonan
Editor a chara Dear editor The year is…
Editor a chara, (Dear editor)
The year is 2012, and Irish republicanism is on the rise. For a moment post decommissioning in 2005, we we’re al worried that the fight would over. There had’t been a substantial military operation till 2008. In 2008 the militant nature of the occupation was well proven. This occupation continues to be proven oppressive by its use of harassment, and internment. It’s been thirty one years since internment was introduced in 1971. Yet I state again we are in 2012 and this injustice has not ceased. Thankfully the people are waking up from the dream that Provisional Sinn Fein has been having everyone believe. Indeed such hypocrisy. Never will Derry City ever be a “UK city of Culture.” Thats besides the point, the pressing at matter besides the removal of the British occupation is support for the POWs in gaol. So long as the occupation is met with resistance, British imperialistic surveillance will only increase. I hope to see more protest and support in the coming months mo chara.
Slan go foill,
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Klem Bachleda
Hey Killian, I ot lost reading the article from the beginning. I don’t understand what message you are trying to send, also, I don’t know exactly where this problem that you are addressing is centered in. What I did get from the article, before “googling” i guess if the person reading the article would have to have un understanding of the situtation you are describing in order to understand your concerns on the matter.
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Killian Noonan
Hey thanks for the input. It was put together in a bit of a hurry. I tend to not specify things but I should always remember my audience will not know what it is I’m talking about. I have a problem with assuming people know things, wont happen again mo chara!
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Kevin Flores
First off I was convinced by your letter. I can tell that obviously this is a very important issue to you and I is something that you care about. I think it was really cool how you wrote in Irish sorry I don’t know what the name of the language is. But it shows the reader that you are actually true Irish and know about your motherlands history and know the language which I think is important because there are a lot of people especially teens who are 2nd generation and do not even know their native language. I agree with you that since we are in the year 2012 that the injustices going on in Ireland should be happening because times have changed the world has evolved since 1971 and many ideas have changed so I agree that the UK should leave.
There were a few things that did confuse me a little, I think if you were to explain what some of the things are in your letter it would really help it out a lot because a lot of people do not know exactly what is going on in Ireland and what some of the things are. Like when you explain about some military offensive in 2008 I kind of get the picture but if you were to explain in a few sentences it would help the reader get a way better understanding. Also when you talk about post decommissioning if you were to explain that little just to give the reader some back ground info about the topic it would clear up some questions that the reader might have. As well as the Provisional Sinn Fein it would be great if there was a brief explanation, it would really help out because then it would really give the reader some background information on the issue and that is important because if someone doesn’t know the background info about your issue especially it would give them a different point of view. I you make these changes it would help your letter out a lot and I think make it better and move convincing. Ill be honest with you I was able to understand you letter and your point of view pretty clearly but I think that some other people who might need a little bit more explaining would not be able to see your point and get your overall message.
Like I said before this was a great letter I liked your message and that you gave examples of what the UK is doing to the people in Ireland and why it is wrong I am pretty sure that most people would agree with you that this has to change because stuff like this should be going on in the world any more especially whit the other problems we are facing such as global warming and world hunger. It’s good that you obviously care about this issue because I feel like if you are going to convince someone about a certain issue you really have to care about it in order to have a strong arguement-
Killian Noonan
Hello Kevin, the answer to you question is Irish is known as the Gaelic, though Gaelic just means “Irish” in Irish. To be honest the Irish people just like the use of the term Irish language so you were dead on! I am glad you were able to pick up what I was putting down mo chara. For the future, I will indeed elaborate in further detail certain things. I often assume quite a bit. To be honest this piece of writing was done in quite a hurry so I apologize. I don’t wanna leave you hanging and asking questions so I’ll be sure to fill in the gaps for future reference. Thanks again mo chara!
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Nick Kleopa
Killian, most of your essays thus far have been excellent but this one really doesn’t make too much sense to me. Seems like you sort of rushed into it, not your typical work. Also I feel that what I did take in is that your saying obviously that the Irish have ben treated unfairly and how British rule needs to cease? In my own opinion, I sum what understand the topic but feel it needs to be written in a way that the receiver will understand. You need to remember that most of us have absolutely no idea what Irish history has been like or what hold true for their future. Just be sure to try and explain everything as much as possible so that the reader doesn’t get lost. Just read your answer to another students post, def take your time next time you write an essay, like I said every piece so far has been excellent, but I feel that this particular piece was definitely lacking in valuable information. All the information that I know about the Irish, I’ve only read from what you have posted on this site in the past. All in all, I think this piece was lacking and like I said you usually do fantastic work but for this one, it was rushed a bit. Try to take more time for the next piece, I look forward to reading more from you.
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Nick Kleopa
Killian, to add on to my previous post,(I need more words to hit the required number) I have done a little thinking back to my own history and hope that they are somewhat alike. I am from Cyprus, don’t know if you know where it is because most people have no idea. It is a small island east of Italy, a little southeast from Greece and a little west of turkey. The weird thing is that the island is shaped only identical to that of the united states which has always got me puzzled. Anyway, back along time ago, the Turkish invaded Cyprus, forcing the farmers and other Cyprians away from most of the island. Away from our own country, and for a long time we were under Turkish rule because turkey was such a large country in comparison that we simply didn’t stand a chance. They were far more Turkish people than there were Cyprians. Only until recently has my father gone back to Cyprus to visit the only part of the country that the Turkish were unable to seize and or conquer. This is what I know from the way my father explained it but I am honestly not nearly as involved with my roots as you are. I am somewhat a little ashamed of not knowing the whole story and the background of the countries but as I said before I greatly admire your knowledge and love for your heritage and where you and your ancestors came from. Ps. Thanks for the reply and I just want to say that I should have remembered more from your last paper I read but history is my worst subject, I never remember anything about history.
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Killian Noonan
Well Nick mo chara, it is never to late to start learning about your roots! My knowledge of Greece is quite limited. Although I do indeed know of the conflict that existed between the Greeks/Cypriots and the Turks. One thing I found out that is interesting is that the Greeks were naturally fair haired people and light skinned. Until the turks came in and rapped their women. A number of years ago as you can imagine. Don’t worry about remembering my last papers, I realize that history is not everyones strong point. To be honest I couldn’t imagine what it would be like to major in it. You should return to your homeland and repel the foreign invaders! A number of nations have done that in history after occupations have gone on for so long. Hell look at Ireland we have been doing it for over 850 years!!
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Killian Noonan
Nick, thank you chara for you analysis. Indeed this piece of work of mine was quite rushed. Also not to mention my ignorance regarding the overall assignment and it’s parameters. I understand 100% of what you mean by being more specific. It is true that no one knows about Irish history. Sorry that this time around wasn’t as fluid as the previous writings of mine. Won’t happen again mo chara! I suppose that all the while when I was posting previous writing on Ireland I thought it would have struck a chord in the memory of you my peer editors. However, one must remember this is a writing class not a history one! Though I will be more detailed next time around! Slán!
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Killian Noonan
This week for my reading research journal I want to reflect upon my paper on the social issue I did. First I’d like to start in saying that the presentations I have seen so far were very well done. I think I even dropped a few jaws when I had to do my elevator speech. I threw out dates and facts that I think some of my fellow classmates are in awe that I even remembered. Ireland’s history and struggle for freedom are import issues to me. I’m glad I could have shared that with my classmates and even the peers on this website that have reviewed my paper. i hope that even I reached out to those with Irish roots and they too are interested and want to be come involved in the struggle. To me it is indeed a noble endeavor. What else that I hope people noticed in my paper is that if they looked at my citations. I had actually Irish Republican POWs that I spoke to over the phone two of them being good friends of mine. THe others are people who are fellow activists and comrades within the struggle. People that know me really well know my way and my stance. Then people who just get to know as such people reviewing my paper comment on me taking the option of neutrality. All I have to say to that is I’m an Irish Republican activist. Always have been, and always will. Slán go fóill mo chara.Tiocfaidh ár lá.
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Killian Noonan
Elevator Speech
Topic: United Ireland
Controversy concerning the unification of Ireland:
1.) The decreasing Loyalist/Unionist majority
2.) By the means of armed struggle
3.) The continued British occupationBenefits of a united Ireland:
1.) Boost and stimulate the Irish economy (Ex: Belfast city, great farm land)
2.) A chance in many centuries time for peace (No more war)
3.) Newly formed and set up form of government (Socialist republic)How to get involved:
1.) Get in contact with a Irish Republican activist group (if you’re in America, then go for a local one)
2.) Raise awareness of British injustice in Ireland
3.) Raise awareness and support for the Irish POWs
4.) For those more courageous, take an armed role in the struggle for Irish freedomConclusion:
The uniting of Ireland in the struggle for national sovereignty, will give the Irish people: equality, justice, and freedom. -
Killian Noonan
The Patriot Game
Over eight hundred and fifty years, that’s how long British oppression has gone on in Ireland. From times dating back to the early medieval ages, England has always ruled Ireland with an iron fist. If these centuries of struggle have taught us anything, it’s that with very generation there will be resistance to British rule. However, beneath the resistance, is underlying controversy, which makes our struggle more difficult. As an Irish Republican I see no controversy, as the matter is only controversial to those whom we fight to free our land. Unfortunately, the tyrannical powers that be dilute our struggle down, calling it terrorism and criminality. For outsiders looking in, the controversy can lie between issues regarding the Nationalist and Loyalist communities. What will become of the decreasing Loyalist majority if Ireland is united? Irish national sovereignty has been an issue for centuries. Obviously, it is an issue to the Irish people themselves, not to mention the foreign invaders (British), and Britain’s colonists (Loyalist). It is an issue, because for centuries all of Ireland was ruled by Britain. Until 1921 after fierce fighting we won the independence of twenty-six of our thirty-two counties. Even today the struggle to regain the six counties in the north of Ireland continues. Nationalist/Republicans want to see the twenty-six counties in the Republic of Ireland, be united with the six counties in the north. Political agendas are to set up a Socialists democratic form of government. Loyalist/Unionist want to keep the six counties British and under British rule. The British government wants this land just why they wanted it in the first place, exploitation. The British government makes an annual one billion pounds or more of Belfast city. The six counties under British rule have some of the best commercial and economic infrastructure. Not to mention the six counties have some of the best farmland. There are many reasons why someone should care about this issue. I’ll give one, if you have any desire to stamp out injustice and oppression then the first place you should turn to look is Ireland.
Many factors have lead up to this issue. For centuries, the British have plundered Ireland for centuries. They have exploited our land all throughout the medieval ages until the present day. Murder is an understatement of what the British did to the Irish people. Attempted genocide is what the British tried to accomplish. One such instance is the so-called “Irish Potato Famine.” A bashful title given to one of the most harrowing atrocities ever committed on Irish soil. In fact there were twenty-two “famines” or genocides in Ireland from 1728-1879. The more commonly known one is the one that took place from 1845-1850. Which as I stated previously was the so-called “potato famine.” During those five years, England seized from Ireland, tens of millions of head of livestock, tens of millions of tons of grains, flour, poultry, meat and dairy products. Not to mention all of this was done at gunpoint towards the poor defenseless Irish people. Even before this, countless times in history pave the way for Irish sovereignty. Such times happened in 1690, when the Irish army fought the forces of King William of Orange at he Battle of the Boyne. Some of the most notable rebellions one should know when taking up a part in Irish republicanism are the famous rebellions. 1798, in Irish history is the year of the French as during that rebellion we had much help from our French allies. Likewise was the case in the rebellion of 1803. Throughout these ages many an uprising by the Irish people was carried out but unfortunately cut down by the British Empire. After 1803 small uprisings happened not only in Ireland but in America as well. However, Easter 1916 is one of the most renowned and important uprisings in all of Irish history. It was hear that the Proclamation of the Irish republic was formed and signed by its respectful signers who also took an active role in the combat. After that what sparked was the Irish War of Independence from 1919-1921 raged on. It was not until the summer of 1921 that the twenty-six counties were freed. However, this is what started the turmoil and conflict in the six counties in the north. After the War of Independence, there was the Irish Civil War. It was a war between the newly formed Free State army (comprised of former IRA volunteers), who were pro-Treaty. They were up against the anti-Treaty IRA forces. This lasted from 1922-1923, with a sad defeat to the anti-Treaty IRA volunteers. After this, little was done on the offensive. An IRA border campaign was launched in the late 40s-50s and a Sabotage campaign in the 30s. Then came a turn of the tide. In 1969 a civil rights movement broke out in Northern Ireland. The British police force at the time RUC, was leading Loyalist mobs and paramilitary groups into Nationalist/Republican areas. Burning them out of their homes in Belfast and in Derry City. With the sacking of the communities many IRA volunteers felt they needed to do something to protect their people. Going against orders by the old IRA army council, a band of volunteers armed headed toward St. Matthews church. They had got word it was going to be attacked along with the entire Republican area of Short Strand. They defended the area and took out several Loyalist gunmen. This new-formed IRA with the support of the people had a new name, The Provisional IRA. The British army launched the offensive all throughout Northern Ireland. From 1969-1998 there was a period of fierce war and turmoil known as the Troubles. Throughout these decades of turmoil many key events happened. 1969 saw the rebirth of the IRA and the Republican movement. 1971 saw internment without trial. 1972 the march against interment where 14 protesters were shot dead by the British army is known as Bloody Sunday. In 1979 there is a prison war going on where republican prisoners go on protest to regain political status. 1981 sees ten young Irish republican prisoners give their lives on a hungerstrike. Finally up until the mid to late 90s when both sides of the conflict started working toward peace. All political prisoners, both Republican and Loyalist are released. 2005 the Provisional IRA decommissions weapons. Turmoil again begins to rise in Northern Ireland. Paramilitary groups such as Real IRA, Continuity IRA, and Óglaigh na hÉireann carry out attacks.
The current situation in Ireland is quite similar to that of the 70s and 80s. In the present day there is continued internment of Republicans. People going to jail for trumped up charges, and continued police harassment. At this day and age in 2012 there is still a prison struggle going on between the POWs. Political groups such as Republican Sinn Fein (breakaway party from Provisional Sinn Fein), RNU, Eirigi, Irish Republican Socialist Party, and 32 County Sovereignty Movement. Are still active in campaigning for a united Ireland and highlighting the injustice from England. The current situation is affecting all those who deem themselves as Irish Republicans. It is affecting political prisoners and their families. Most of what is in the news is of attacks carried out by Irish republicans. These armed and active republicans can be prescribed to an organization or simply independent. A major challenge for Republicans today is continued police harassment. Even the media trying to demoralize and criminalize the republican struggle is a challenge. Putting aside the armed activism. Irish Republican POWs in jail are being beaten and tortured. However, the groups listed above are always raising money and awareness for the political prisoners and their families.
One such organization I am a member of here in America is the Irish Freedom Committee. We highlight the issues of the British occupation, and raise awareness and funds for Irish POWs and their families. Likewise is 32 county sovereignty movement, they hold numerous protest and rallies for POWs. Some of their members have even been known to run for election. Not only that but an end to the continuous British harassment and policing in Ireland. They call for the immediate withdraw of the British establishment from Ireland. Republican Sinn Fein similar to its sell out counter parts at Provisional Sinn Fein holds elections. They like the several other groups mentioned play their part in highlighting the injustice and oppression of the British. Also support and demonstrations for the POWs is always rampant. Republican Network for Unity, (RNU), is a community activist organization. A community watch if you will. Although protesting and highlighting key issues is a forefront, they take pride in keeping the community safe. The constant watch and awareness for drugs, and drug dealers is always a first priority. RNU has many chapters in Ireland even some here in America such as New York and Philadelphia.
How to get involved? Irish Republicanism is a lot of hard work. Although in America is one is interested one can talk to me (Killian Noonan). With facing constant harassment by both crown forces and American agencies, do not think lightly on your part in the cause. Depending on how active you are can determine if your phones are tapped, if they search your house, or if they follow you. It is no game; you will be subject to state harassment and even a target. It is not for the faint of heart. However, if that does not discourage you and your beliefs and agenda far surpass fears of harassment, you can get in touch with a number of these groups on how to help. Right not POW morale is crucial, and support for political prisoners in always needed. If you have spare time, feel free to write to republican prisoners, either within Portlaoise Prison, or Maghaberry. Even raising money for POWs families through raffles is a big help. Bobby Sands the man who lead the 1981 hungerstrike once said, “Everyone, Republican or otherwise, has their own particular part to play. No part is too great or too small; no one is too old or too young to do something.”
To learn more visit anyone of the sites listed below:
The Irish Freedom Committee
American based Irish activist group. Great for those who are from Chicago, as it’s head quarters is in Chicago. It is an easy and accessible way for someone to contribute to the cause. Protests are held at planned events. Commemorations and held on anniversaries of key events. Money and support is raised for POWs and their families.http://www.irishfreedomcommittee.net/
RNU-Republican Network for Unity
A multi based organization. A great advocate of the Irish POWs and highlighting oppression. Also great community advocates who watch out for the younger generation and the area they live in. Great place to be informed of key issues in the struggle.http://www.republicannetwork.ie/
Republican Sinn Fein
One of the strongest political groups out there. Deep history in constitutional republicanism. Always looking for activist to help out. Protesting, and raising awareness are their key issues. Always trying new ways of getting young people educated on Irish history. Always finding ways of getting the wider community educated on the current situation. http://www.rsf.ie/Works cited:
McManus, Gerard, current POW at Maghaberry Prison, phone conversation, 2/20/2012
MacDhómhnaill, Tarlach, current POW at Portaloise Prison, phone conversation, 2/19/2012
Hastings, Nathan, member of 32 county sovereignty movement, phone conversation, 2/19/2012
Martin Og Meehan, Leader of RNU, former POW, phone conversation, 2/19/2012
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Nick Kleopa
After reading your essay I can see that your background is extremely important to you and that many things in the World have affected your origins for no good reasons. After reading the first paragraph, small errors and mislpellings are all I found but also didn’t really understand what the British actually gained from belfest city. Products?Goods? Certain types of foods that they could make money from. I feel going into a little more detail on what the british gained from certain places would help the reader better understand your own position and what it happening. Paragraph two is much more imformative with lots of information icluding dates and details that are expained fully. Paragraph 2 I can summwhat relate to as the country that I am from(Cyprus) a small island off the coast between Italy, Greece and turkey was taken over by the turkish for many years. Still till this day there are only certain parts of the country that the Cyprians are aloud to stay in. I do not know anywhere near the amount of imformation on that problem as you do with Ireland and the British though. I honestly think you have done really well in familiarising yourself with your heritage and I think that is really important for everyone to know what has happend in the past, present or even the future. Back to the body of the paper, Paragraph 3-5 were def a nice touch. Details were being explained very well and it did have me guessing what your were trying to say. As I was reading I was picturing what was going on and it was easy for me to follow along with the situations. I like the fact that you piced a topic that you feel so strongly about. This topic as I said before, about you being extremely involved with your origins makes the essay that much more interesting. It is more interesting because myself as the reader know its coming from a person that understands what has happended and someone who’s family has been affected with this problem etc… Than someone from a different background trying to explain a situation or a problem when they are of a completely different descent. From the sound of things you obviousely know what your talking about and I felt that you put everything in order nicely. All of the information was tied in with nice examples and was easy to follow. All in all great essay and I look foreward to reading your next one. PS the Title of your essay caught my eye for sure.
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Lee McKinnis
The Turkish army invaded half of Cyprus and the Greek Cypriots were ethnically cleansed to the Greek partion of the island by the Turkish Army to keep Greek and Turkish Cypriots from killing each othrer
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Kevin Jaderberg
As I’ve said in the past, I think you’re a great writer and your message is very clear. When I read your papers on Ireland, I can’t help but want to learn more. This is not a knock against you, (lord knows I’m as biased as they come when it comes to some issues) but when I read lines like “poor defenseless Irish people” and “They defended the area and took out several Loyalist gunmen.” I wonder if I’m just getting one side of the truth. ‘Poor defenseless’ etc. is more of a literary embellishment than a report of the facts. Describing what the Irish do as ‘defending’ and ‘taking out gunmen’ may be accurate to history, but the reality is that some people shot some other people. In order to be more persuasive, try avoiding the more colorful descriptions.
Now, I’m not disputing the facts, it’s just that phrasing things a certain way infers that there is a bias. Since I know very little about Ireland’s situation, I would like to hear both sides of the debate. When I read your paper, I felt that you did a wonderful job describing the stance the Republicans have, what their goals are, and how they’ve interpreted history, but the portrayal of the British is one of genocide and pure evil. I’m not arguing your points; I really have no place in this debate after all, just be mindful of embellishments you may be making unconsciously. If you want to persuade someone on the opposing side or even just someone like me who doesn’t really know much about the issue, try to take a more objective point-of-view. Don’t change the facts, those seem to all be on your side anyway, just watch your wording.
I like reviewing your work because it’s always a bit challenging at first. It’s hard to take an approach when it’s clear you know exactly what you’re talking about. I always find myself scrutinizing the semantics and structure of your work rather than focusing on the content. The ‘meat and potatoes’ if you will. I think perhaps I am just incredibly critical of anyone who calls themself a republican. That word may have a completely different connotation in Ireland, but the meaning here in America is one of opportunism and “traditional goals” such as suppressing anyone who isn’t a straight white christian male.
I don’t exactly know what Irish republicans stand for beyond what you write in these papers, but I do hope that you focus your passion on your writing. No matter what happens in the future, people will be able to look back and see who shot whom. It won’t matter why they were shot or by whom, just that a person’s basic right to be alive was violated. The effect of a rifle may be more immediate, but it can never transcend time like good writing can. I truly hope that Ireland will one day be rinsed of all the blood spilled in its name. Until then, keep writing mo chara.
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Killian Noonan
Thank you very much for the feed back Caoimhín (Kevin the it Irish form). I really appreciate the insight. I just wanted to comment back and perhaps clarify the things you may not have understood fully. Indeed you are correct and right in your speculation that a “republican,” does have a different meaning in regards to Irish republicanism. Irish republicanism is not to be confused with nationalism. Although many individuals in the north of Ireland may be nationalist and want to identify themselves as part of the Irish people as a whole ethnic group, they may not hold the beliefs such as Irish republicanism. Irish republicanism itself is an ideology that the British presence in Ireland needs to be removed and Ireland be a sovereign nation. Many Irish republicans indeed can be nationalist and hold beliefs of wanting to identify with Ireland and the Irish people as a whole. I hope that cleared it up for you. What history and the media has misconstrued is that the struggle in Ireland is based on religion Catholics and Protestants. However, this is in fact is false. What many people do not know that one of the founding fathers of Irish republicanism was Theobald Wolfe Tone, who indeed was a Protestant. Even in more recent history much of Belfast Brigade’s B Company were from Protestant backgrounds. Seán Mac Stíofáin from a Protestant Irish family born and raised in England and even served in the Royal Air Force became the Chief of Staff the IRA from 1969-1972 the bloodiest years in the conflict. Religion clearly is not the issue at hand it is to put it simply a struggle for freedom against the colonial powers that continue the occupation. Hope that just gives you a better understand and insight mo chara. Also I understand 100% of what you were saying in regards to my use of terms as “genocide,” and “poor defenseless Irish people.” Indeed one can see where the use of literary terms such as these may be watering down the actual facts. So I will definitely take that into consideration in the future. However, it can be easily seen that great emotions and feelings are brought into my papers about such a pressing matter that I feel so strongly about. Thanks again for all the feed back mo chara I look forward to reading your paper. Slán go fóill mo chara. Tiocfaidh ár lá
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Lee McKinnis
Republicanism or being a ‘Republican’ in Europe means ‘opponent of the monarchy or aristocrats’ – meaning you want to establish a republican form of government.
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Killian Noonan
Well that term is very broad in regards to Europe, the question brought up was Irish republicanism. Which indeed at one point when monarchy was the power, it was meant to fight back against the forces of the crown. However I believe Kevin was asking more so in terms of today. Which is the definition I provided above.
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Kevin Flores
First off I really like your paper because I can tell that it is something that is important to you and it is something you obviously care about. I think this is very important becasue it is really hard to write a paper about something that you do not care about. I also think it is great that you know alot about your background and where your roots are from because alot of people donot even know anything about where theyre from. Its really good that you didnt forget where your from because that happens to alot of people when they move away from an other contry or the contry that theyre ancestors are from.
I like the way you wrote your paper because you explained the backgroung and history of Ireland and how the british people took over and caused what seems to be a beautiful contry into basically a war zone. I liked how you explained the ways that the british people oppressed the Irish people the only bad thing I am going to say is I think it would make your paper better if you were to put some statistics if possible in there.
The last paragraph confused me abit, but I really liked the quote you ended it with because I said something similar to that in my paper. Because I feel that alot of people that want to help fix a certain issue think that the only way the can fix something is to take a huge role and I really disagree with that because I think that if you have people who are willing to make small contibutions and fill small roles it is better to have alot of people who take small roles and are willing to contibute instead of having a few people who are true “activists”.
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Lee McKinnis
Just to point out, you should probably use the word ‘England’ and ‘English’ government more than ‘british’ government, as Scotland and Wales aren’t exactly happy with the historical actions England did to the Irish AFAIK. I can see you’re a lot more involved in this from your phrasing, and as Kevins said it’s probably better to be more neutral in that.
Also talking about the issues with Scotland and Wales and how they commpare to Ireland is also useful (I think the PIRA sent guns and whatnot to a Welsh separatist group, suns of Glendwyr)
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Killian Noonan
On the contrary I see it fitting to use British. If I was referring to the Scots I would say the Scottish, likewise I would do for the Welsh. Indeed the Provos (PIRA) gave guns to the FWA, (Free Wales Army).
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Killian Noonan
I really enjoyed reading “You Can’t Dodge All Bullets.” It reminded me of my youth and how I would throw a banter of questions at any adults in the room. The oddest question are what I sought answers for. I will be the first one to admit, I have a temper and a bad one at times. I am also known within my family and friend circles as being the guy ho is never wrong. I feel that being an only child has caused this in one way or another. As a kid I had everything, I was the golden child of the family and being the only grandson. Now in my experience and wisdom I have gained from life, I am not as focused on myself as I was as a boy. One thing I am working on, is I still ask the oddest sometimes most idiotic questions. I am working though on using my head more and thinking things out for myself instead of asking right away. I also will admit that me being a know it all and never being wrong has to be resolved too. Though as they say with age comes experience and with experience comes wisdom.
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Killian Noonan
There are many types of activism. Though no matter what cause it is, there are always going to be activists. Service, although slightly different, it is not entirely. Both are ideologies shared by countless individuals. One difference I think there is between the two of them is activism can be controversial. Whereas service is about humanity and for the greater good of the Earth. People who are involved with acts of service, are typically donating food to shelters, helping get children in Africa medicine. Though undoubtedly that too is an act of activism. It’s just my stance on how I separate the two is service is for your fellow man and for betterment of civilization. I see activism as not just political, activism has the approach of rallying and campaigning for things that are not mainstream. Both activism and service, are crucial parts in the fabric of our society.
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Killian Noonan
While reading this work, I discovered what a profound individual Rajeev Goyal is. Indeed it is remarkable for someone some one so young to build a water pump Nepal. Thoughts race through my head at the struggle it must have been for Rajeev to ask politicians for more funding. He had a noble and strong belief, which is something I really admire in him. Despite when the trials and tribulations got increasingly hard he continued on with dauntless pride. I really find his story encouraging because he made a huge difference and didn’t need a group of people to aid him in his quest. He is an inspiration for people at home and abroad who may have doubted that one person can’t make a difference. However, Rajeev truly showed that one person can. Many people have a fear of speaking up and giving their beliefs a voice and chance to be heard. If anyone who reads this, if the only thing you get out of it, is speaking out for your beliefs and that one person can make a difference that is all you need. Truly I wish more people in the world were like Rajeev.
Hessler,Peter.”A Reporter At Large, Village Voice, The Peace Corps Brightest Hope.” The New Yorker. 2010. pgs. 101-109.Splatter. Writting101.net.web -
Killian Noonan
Who should Survive? Indeed, there was much controversy and discussion that went into our picking who should live and who shall die. Within our group we had no major prejudices such as black or white. However, much discussion went into if we should save the prostitute. I for one was against it. Which brings me to my next point. When this assignment was given, before we were in groups I only chose to save four people initially. Indeed quite unorthodox to this assignment. Then as it were, and we broke down into the group, my arm was twisted so to say in who I should reconsider saving. In the end when the group couldn’t make a clear cut decision or compromise, a coin toss was en stated. Quite unconventional to leave a person fate up to chance. However that is what needed to be done to get the group forward and progressing. Much emotion went out for the smaller children in this tragic comedy. However, for the people we did all originally agree not to save our reasons were al intertwined. It was an interesting assignment. It made me put a tremendous amount of thought into it.
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Killian Noonan
In this weeks journal, there was a tide of emotions. At one point in the essay, the author talks about how the man at home never felt this way if trains collided or if any other tragic event happens in his own country. I speculate the man in the story has a soft spot for the soldier. The man is putting himself in his place. To be alone in a foreign nation itself is quite depressing. However, to be a soldier who is being dragged from his car and mutilated by the local population hits a chord for the man. I feel he very much puts him in his shoes. In fact, it is sen several times in this article the man in quite on edge or anxious to begin with. What I deduce is that seeing the horrible image indeed calmed him down. Calm meaning not that he was resting or at peace, but calm and diligently thinking of the image he just saw. Millions of thoughts must have raced through his head. Will the family ever get the body back? Will those that did this be brought to justice? It happened so easily to one soldier, can it happen to another one?
Eggers, Dave. “How We Are Hungry”, What It Means When A Crowd In A Faraway Nation Takes A Soldier Representing Your Own Nation, Shoots Him, Drags Him From His Vehicle And Then Mutilates Him In The Dust. McSweeney’s, 2004. pgs 17-18. Splatter: The Messy Art of Writing.Web. 2 Feb. 2012 -
Killian Noonan
Live.Kill.Die
I was born December 16th 1992. My upbringing was in a staunch Irish working class family. One could say I had a father for the first seventeen years of my life. However, I will not divulge into the situation leading to my estrangement from him or his family. All that needs to be known is it is my mother and I, and my robust Irish family. My clan as I like to call it, is from County Mayo, or Mhaigh Eo as the Irish language prefers. I have more clan spread out in Dublin, (Baile Átha Cliath). Over my many years of traveling back to the homeland I have made and kept many dear friends, north and south of the border. My trips to Ireland, like my boyhood youth, were filled with heroic stories of Ireland and Irish history. I learned songs and stories. From boyhood to this day my proud boast to say I am Irish still goes on. Though it is one thing to classify oneself as Irish, I fall into a different category. I am a staunch Irish Republican. An Irish republican is one who believes that the six counties still under foreign occupation in the north of Ireland rightfully belong to the Irish people. Not to mention that we have every right to take up arms and fight for the sovereignty of our country. Which poses the questions that were given to us for this assignment. What would I kill for? What would I die for? And what would I live for? The simple answer to that question mo chairde (my friends) is Ireland.
Now the argument I have heard before is “I don’t live in Ireland, why should I care?” The simple answer to that, is my native land of Eire, has been under oppression and denied freedom for over eight hundred and fifty years. Family and friends, either directly or directly been affected by the occupation. I have had both family and friends, fight and die. Today three very good friends of mine are behind bars for their beliefs, that Ireland should be united. Seen here, is a picture of my good friend Gerard, and his comrade Kevin on their way to court. Both are on the dirty protest as a result of the torturous and degrading conditions within Maghaberry Prison, and as such have these beards. Also within Maghaberry, is my other friend Kevin (not the same as pictured). Then south of the border in old historic Portlaosie prison is my good friend Tarlach. For their privacy I will not go into why they are incarcerated, all that needs to be known is they are Irish republicans who firmly stand for a united Ireland and a complete break down of the English connection. I live for the cause these brave men have risked their lives and very freedom for. I firmly support the Irish republican POWs one hundred percent. Should a man that fights for his country’s freedom be labeled a criminal? Or dubbed a terrorist?
In 1981 ten men died on hungerstrike to restore the political status that was wrongfully taken away from them. Even still to this day in 2012 over thirty years on and Irish POWs are still not granted political status and forced to endure the suffering of living hell. Indeed some of the best Irish poetry and literature of that tim came from the prisons. Irish republican martyr Bobby Sands is revered internationally for his brilliant work, and timeless quotes. He was the first Irish POW to die on hungerstrike in 1981, the months following his death, nine of his other comrades also valiantly gave their lives. “They won’t break me because the desire for freedom, and the freedom of the Irish people, is in my heart. The day will dawn when all the people of Ireland will have the desire for freedom to show. It is then that we will see the rising of the moon.”-Bobby Sands
One thing to note is I am not a all English hating Irish radical. I in no way shape or form hate the English people. They are some of the nicest people I have ever met. However, I have strong opposing views about their government and policies, especially those consisting of Ireland. Which brings me to the most controversial part of this assignment. I would fight for Irelands freedom, possibly kill if need be. What I have said does indeed seem like a radical statement. However, is having the desire or love for freedom and justice wrong? When we the Irish people were, and still are being plagued with oppression and injustice, why can we not fight back? Oppression breed’s resistance, and that is why I believe the fight in Ireland should continue until Ireland is for once and for all a free thirty-two county sovereignty nation. Which is why I would take up such a noble cause to fight for my native land.
Within in the Irish republican movement, there is no time for romanticism. To reach our goal it takes a lot of hard work and dedication. The only thing that should lead one to showing such dedication to a cause like this is the sole determination that you will see your goal to the end. Irish republicanism difficult and long path till we reach our end game. The limited outcomes for someone like me who has such a passion for this causes is either prison or death. Statements like that do indeed put things in perspective. Throughout the entire struggle for Irish freedom, countless men and women have given their lives. Great Irish poet and republican Pádraig Pearse once said, “…Life springs from death; and from the graves of patriot men and women spring living nations…” Many great songs and ballads have been written about such courageous men and women. I think the ballad that really pays tribute and remembers the brave sacrifice of those martyrs lies in the song “Lullaby to Heaven.”
Now please do not get me wrong, I am not a family hating radical. I love my family dearly with all my heart. Likewise those I consider my true friends. I picked what I live for, what I’d kill, and die for. I wanted to break away from the normality of this assignment by choosing something unorthodox. I think if the day comes of my unfortunate and untimely end, and it is through my armed activism as a Irish republican or as a POW on hungerstrike there may be a song attributed to me that may go like this. So for now slán go fóill mo chairde. Tiocfaidh ár lá!
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Kevin Flores
I really liked what you would live, die, kill for. I basically put the same reasons in my paper. I think it is great that you know so much about your native country and still have a very strong love for it. It was really interisting to read your paper because i found out alot about ireland and its history. I never knew alot about ireland before i read your paper but now I feel like I know a little it seems like a very interesting place. Its cool that you decided to write a paper that is unorthodox and different that most the other ones. Also I think that you chose to write about a topic that is so close to home and is something that you are so passionate about. Overall I really liked your paper and feel like you did a very good job.
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Nick Kleopa
This paper grabbed my attention right away with the date. It is laid out a little differently than some of the others that I have read but in a good way. I feel that this paper has a lot more background and sole put into it and it gave me some different views and understanding of where your coming from. I also learned some things about what is happening in the world and some history about the Irish and what they are all about as well. Your paper also has a lot of good examples and quotes put into it that just brings the big picture out and really helps the reader understand. I really liked the first paragraph because as I was reading it, it had basically painted a picture for me to help explain your background. The part about your friends was also very interesting and I wish I knew what was happening exactly but I respect there privacy. I could not help but wonder though. I also feel that as long as you stand up for what you believe in, if you are imprisoned for it you won’t be guilty of anything but your beliefs. Hopefully when they are out they will continue to fight for what they believe in. Paragraph 3, some more information that I have never heard of and I’m glad you included in your paper. I learned a lot of things from reading this paper. All in all, I think this paper has a lot of sole and inner feelings brought out into the open which really helps the reader try and put the writers shoes on. Great paper.
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Kevin Jaderberg
Your wealth of knowledge regarding Ireland’s history is impressive. I’m Irish myself. Well, not completely. I think only 25%. Have you ever seen the movie The Guard? It came out last year. Anyway, it takes place in Ireland. You’d love it. I forget the name of the main guy. He was in 28 Days Later. You’d know him if you saw him. My knowledge of Ireland is rather limited I’m afraid. The few Irish people I’ve met at the pub down the street were nice though.
While I admire your passion, I think your willingness to kill or die for this patch of land is unfortunate. There are enough teenagers dying around the world as it is. The term “armed activism” is interesting to me. I believe such phrases are filtered through government databases, and rightly so. I’m not a fan of the word terrorism. I always thought fanaticism sounded so much better. Anyway, that’s not really the point. Peaceful protest is the “in thing” these days. All the kids are doing it. Look at the Arab Spring or Occupy Wall Street. The problem with picking up a rifle is that it tends to send the wrong message. It becomes hard to tell the oppressed from the oppressors.
In all seriousness I’m unfamiliar with the situation facing Ireland, but I understand that killing is wrong. I’m not basing that on any sort of divine law, killing a person is just a dick move. If there’s ever another option on the table, (and there always is) give it a fair shake. We need to get to a point where we’re all working towards the same goal. Peace is a great one to start with in my opinion. Peace is totally cool because people statistically live longer when they’re not getting shot at. That’s important to note also. Peace can never be enforced. You can’t shoot your way to a peaceful resolution. Bloodshed always begets bloodshed.
There’s nothing waiting for us on the other side. That’s an important thing to remember. When a body shuts down, the flag it died for ceases to have any meaning, regardless of its colors. When the brain inside the skull stops working, there is nothing. Life is what counts. Living for a cause beats dying for one any day.
You seem to have a knack for writing. I think if you used that skill as the primary weapon in your fight, you’d reach a lot more people. History has proved that the pen truly is mightier than the sword. In a hundred years, kids could be quoting you in their papers. Wouldn’t that be something?
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Killian Noonan
What I believe ecological literacy means, is how we interpret the events that go on in our everyday lives. If we break down the word we get ecology, which is the study of organisms that live within an ecosystem. Such discussion with animals was put into the article we read, but it goes much further. It is about the web of life we as human live and weave everyday. How in generations to come will we maintain that balanced web or will we let it diminish. One such term caught my eye in the essay and it was sustainability. Which simply means doing things in ways where it will not hurt people, the planet, or profit. The three “P’s” of sustainability if you will. Now in terms of us as human being it is crucial to our success and survival to be sustainable. We need it in our businesses, in politics, and in our personal lives. Now when we look at literacy, it can be inferred as do we know or understand what needs to be done? When talking of sustainability in our lives and society, literacy means do we have the knowledge or know how to achieve our goal. Like our fellow creatures that dwell on this Earth, we too need to preserve our communities with the use of sustainability. If no action is taken we leave nothing for future generations t continue with,
Fritjof Capra. “From The Web of Life.” learning.writing101.net. Web. 26 Jan. 2012
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Kevin Flores 3:02 pm on April 22, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
First off I agree with you that underage drinking is a problem especially because many young people who drink usually do not how to control it and do not set a limit for them selves when they do drink. It is also a growing problem because it is so popular among people of all races and social groups. I like that your group was going to choose this issue because it is one that definitely needs to be addressed because it is an issue that as young people we face very often and chances are we see this problem almost daily. I like that your group wanted to do your service at an organization that focuses on this particular social problem but I totally understand that your group wasn’t going to be able to find an organization that takes care of this problem. I also agree with you when you say that it wasn’t really a big deal because of your family’s life style, but I think the main problem at least the way I see it is when young people get drunk at parties or get togethers and because there aren’t any older responsible people around they get really drunk and can cause harm to them selves or others.
When I read about the groups that you found about and how they require a lot of tests it got me thinking how come the organizations require so much information about the persons volunteering? They sound like they would be interesting to participate in but I also realize that we didn’t have a lot of time for this project and therefore we were all pretty limited to what we could do. I know it was also hard because not everyone had the same schedule as far as school, work, family, ECT. In my group one of the main problems was finding time that we can all meet up to discuss what we were going to do and even the day we were going to volunteer. As far as finding the organization that we were going to volunteer for thank god it wasn’t really an issue for us because we pretty much agreed on the topic of animal abuse. We just recently went out to this animal welfare league and spent time there and we were able to help out animals that were at the place and learn a lot about animal abuse, and how someone would adopt an animal. I learned a lot by doing this because I always liked dogs and basically what I did was walk dogs for a few hours. I had fun from this experience and I learned a lot from it.
I wish you and your group the best of luck finding out what organization you will do your project on. I’m sure that what ever you end up doing for this project that you will have fun and be able to get a learning experience from it and be able to make a great presentation about it.
Killian Noonan 1:36 am on April 23, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Cheers Kevin! All the best to you and yours. Well unfortunately we had to move on from our initial goal of underage drinking. However, we have chosen to pursue our interests in tis organization that assembles bikes for those in need on them. So I can’t wait till we actually do our work for them, should prove to be an interesting experience! Slan go foill!
Nick Kleopa 10:48 am on April 23, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
First and foremost, I had to smirk as you posted this piece would not be about the Irish Republican struggle. I was very interested while reading this as my last main entry before the service piece was about alcohol abuse and how it effects everyone. I felt very strong about that topic and can relate to your piece because of the hours I’ve personally spent researching alcohol and its effects on the human body. I do know its hard to get involved with this particular topic because there is really not much to do besides getting people the information. I remember local police officers in D.A.R.E would come to our grade school and talk to us about it but all I could remember was shooting a basket with drunken goggles on and walking the line with the goggles on. It was a fun game and not very informative. At that age(maybe 8-10) kids are just too young to understand the material. It would have been much more beneficial if they had came to our middle school, high school and colleges throughout. Colleges are by far the worst offenders and instead of going for a run or working out, etc.. The students turn to alcohol as they think it will take all their problems away. I think that parents, teachers, and law enforcement need to get more involved if they want to see these kids see their 21st birthday. Anyway, to your topic two, I can sum what relate to as my group initially wanted to go to a retirement home. They gave out applications and wanted us to give references and do background checks which would have probably taken at least a good two weeks to complete. I like how you put you were in a little bit of a panic cause that is exactly how I felt when most of our service groups weren’t contacting us back. I felt like we weren’t gonna be able to get anything done. I do hope the third choice works out for you and your group. I know that it was a pain in the but to find something to devote some time to. Do community service isn’t too bad at all. The problems is finding a group to devote to and figure out the planning process/going through the application process and or getting background check/drug testing done depending on the groups involved in. The Feed my starving children and share your soles group should be fun for your group. I haven’t personally done any research or anything on these groups but from what I can expect is a great turnout. I recently saw the container in the library at moraine valley for the share your soles shoe drive. It was completely full. That is definitely a nice thing to see. I have heard a group went their and cleaned/stacked shoes for their service. That might be what your group will end up doing. Anyway, I look forward to reading your next piece and as usual great job.
Killian Noonan 9:01 pm on April 23, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
Thanks for the feed back Nick. I knew it would catch your interest as I recall you writing something about this a while ago. Anyway, you’ll be sad to know that our group was not able to work with an organization. A lot of it was official serious business, and required people to be certified. Obviously, it was out of the question. However, my group and I moved our interests to other service. A place that gives old bikes to those in need of them. A lot of it deals with assembling and disassembling bikes etc. So my group and I are very excited to actually get some hands on work done. I’m good with my hands so it should be a problem. I really wish we could have done something with underage drinking but we were running out of time and needed an organization fast! Once again thanks for input, and good luck to your group!
Klem Bachleda 11:17 am on April 24, 2012 Permalink | Log in to Reply
The opening sentences made my giggle just slightly. I like how you added that for the first time, you are involved in something other than the Irish Republican Struggle. The choice of volunteering towards alcoholism would be great, but the first thing that came to my mind was “How would one volunteer to help those abusing alcohol? Would they share personal stories? Would what a young volunteer says really impact the individual attending an AA meeting?” The other statement you made that made me smirk was the fact that you are Irish and want to participate in helping underage drinking. I’m not labeling you, I just think it was funny because I’m Polish, and if you get those two nationalities together, it’s a week long party. As I kept reading, my thoughts were confirmed; it’s nearly impossible to volunteer at an AA meeting or such at our young age and situations/time constraints. Although it didn’t work, the initiative was there. It was a unique idea, but they don’t always works.
Another thing you mentioned a few times in your paper so far is the lack of communication from the different organizations. My group had the same issues with the lack of communication from the organizations. Now, I don’t know if they are that busy or are not dedicated to what they do, communication is key in any aspect of life.
It’s good to see that your group consistently pursued different options if the previous option / idea failed.
The food depository is also a good idea, and that is what my group pursued, but we had trouble finding an organization that had time slots available to accommodate our schedules. It was tough coordinating the event so all of us would attend, so we decided to go on separate days.
The details you input about your struggle to work with an organization concerning alcoholism is pretty good. The different organizations you contacted with the outcome of the idea shows your group tried different avenues. When you write the rest of your paper, include details like you did in the beginning to let us all know if the experience, for you, was worth the extra effort.
While reading other papers, I noticed that hardly anybody actually participated in volunteering yet, including myself (until yesterday). In the papers I did read, there was a lack of personal feelings included. Make sure to tell us your experience from your point of view, not just statistics or facts. This would make for a great piece. Good luck.